40th Birthday Flyer

[twofivedesigns]

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

whats the point of all these flyers? trying to advert or what?

[twofivedesigns]

To show people what I can do. I would like feedback on what people dislike about them so I don't make the same mistakes on future flyers. What did you think I was doing by posting them? They advertise club events not my personal biz.

[gr4ph1kP4ND4]

well you didnt say cnc or anything so idk

heres my cnc:
it does its job, its got a good layout and the colours fit well and seem appropraite. i dont like how the glasses are reflected upsidedown behind the black screen, and the black at the top of the champagne glasses looks bad, because the background is golden behind the glasses, even though when you look through them you see gold. you've gotta keep backgrounds consistant or everything looks fake. i dont like how the text at the bottom starts to fade at the sides, it makes it harder to see. it might just be me/cause i dont have my contacts in, so take that last comment with a grain of salt ^.^;
i know its probably required, but the blue logo really pulls my eyes away, and its distracting. theres prolly not much you can do about it, so that much i understand.

i like the type of lighting in the background you've got going on, it looks very flashy and it fits the theme very well. i also like the text you've got going, the texture fits the theme too.
good job ^.^