Final Fantasy SOLDIER

[jags]

CnC please and help me with ideas on what to add or if its okay

[Gallagher]

Not much into manips, but this needs a bit of work mate. Correct lighting is difficult to achieve because the lighting and ambient lighting are going to be different unless you get quite lucky with the images or find a good way to incorporate a proper light source, as far as it goes for this particular piece it is quite off imo.

I'm also not digging the smudging, it looks like you did it to simply add effects to the piece. Some areas look ok, but it's overdone. Sephiroths entire arm is absent and it looks like the rain is disintegrating the characters. Also when adding the splashed droplets be aware of the lighting and try to avoid putting them in shaded areas.

The idea is good and the background is very nice and seems to match the mood of the piece. What I said above is simply my opinion, just kiu mate and do what you feel looks best.

[jags]

thanku and and i had to smudge out his arm cause it wasnt in the render

[Scrib]

Everything Gallagher said is correct, it also looks really lq because you used video game renders. When maniping, try to use human stocks.

[jags]

i wanted to make it final fantasy based so it was very hard to find good stocks that seemed depressed aslong as the mood works it ok and il just edit the rain and the blurring who knows mayhbe il make it that the rain is making them melt away :P