Perfection

[DR809]

So Whadaya guys think?

[DR809]

wth is this 11 views and not one comment ><

[donutman7]

Try 35 views and no comment, noone likes to reply. Its not bad, its a bit plain for me no depth, all bg effects not foreground. I like to stay with this rule : Don't center the focal.

[DR809]

Thanks bro but I had foreground and it was completely messy so I decided to just remove it.

[chonfat]

perfect o.o

[Maridesu]

and dont ever put your text over your focal like that. :s

[Xelo]

the blue sky doesn't fit the color of the render. the white off the text is to white compared to the clouds. i don't mind it being partionally on the focal. actually it seems the best place to put it. but as it is now it stands out to much. find a way to blend it. other then that this is nice. oh and Maridsu; this focal is perfect in the center, she looks straight and stands straight, but that's my opinion.

[shiv96]

Agreed with Xelo
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[Andrew]

i dont find this as perfection but a little distracting.. the birds in the background need to fly away already o.o

in other words.. it does need some work, depth, lighting .... text