Abstract flames..

[DrAlban]

c&c please..^^

[i make sigs!]

eh again
pretty blah
it could use some color maybe a render but if your just going "abstract" just more color imo

[Takken]

The composition is interesting. I like the texture of the effects in the sig, however I think its empty, and more varied elements in this piece can really give it a boost. I think the lighting is poor and you should focus more on the color scheme and contrast. Vary the levels and tones of the white and black and create more depth that way. Work on lighting and composition. Keep at it!