chick with gun

[Bogui]

collab with schultz
i messed it up D:
didnt what to call it
so cnc

[Hoshiko]

Well, I'm not sure if I should take this seriously or not? Lulz.
The render looks a little oversharpened, and everything is blended pretty poorly...
Text looks bitchin' though...ha. :P
(it's late leave me alone xD )

[cC.Aleksander]

AGreed on the oversharpened part, but i think the rest (except the text) looks ace.
A different color for text and that is ace to:P

[cs4pro]

It's a bit oversharppend idd. Or the render is a bit lq I dunno that.
I also think that the red soft brushes on the efffects have to go.
The color is not fitting with the render imo.
Just try something blue/green. Then use some adjustment layers to get the colors right.

The text def needs some improvement
Also the white border isn't really fitting imo. I would make it black I guess.
The effects are looking pretty cool and so does the lightning.
Tho I would remove the soft brushes at the bottom of the sig (maybe I would remove them all ) But they are too bright there.

Overall pretty good job but it still needs some work.
Keep it up guys

[Xelo]

It's a bit oversharppend idd. Or the render is a bit lq I dunno that.
I also think that the red soft brushes on the efffects have to go.
The color is not fitting with the render imo.
Just try something blue/green. Then use some adjustment layers to get the colors right.

The text def needs some improvement
Also the white border isn't really fitting imo. I would make it black I guess.
The effects are looking pretty cool and so does the lightning.
Tho I would remove the soft brushes at the bottom of the sig (maybe I would remove them all ) But they are too bright there.

Overall pretty good job but it still needs some work.
Keep it up guys

agree

[Bogui]

thanks for cnc

[schultz]

rofl, i had nothing to do with that

[notthefed]

GJ but text isn't doing it for me. red is too strong (maybe clip mask?) and im a firm believer that text should always be off center/focal