Cartoon ( Vector )

[Lietuvis]

It's not finished ...




what ya think ?

[Goldman]

Looks really good
I like the abstract roughness.

[DinoKind]

all i see is the red x of doom

[Lietuvis]

damn geocities >.<

take a look later , please

[Dreiko Shadrack]

Imageshack is your friend

[Lietuvis]

it&#39;s up now .. for me ..

[Dreiko Shadrack]

not bad, not bad at all.
Edit: Alas i cannot critique it beyond that, as i know very little of vector based artwork and how to do it.

[unit_number_43]

Try to consolidate and smooth. Pick three or four colors that you&#39;re going to work with and use only those colors. Use the zoom and make every shape as smooth as you can.

It has potential but it needs work still.

[robgasm]

um... if you properly vectored you wouldnt have the squiggly lines, this looks like one of the "fake vector" things that uses filters

no offense, but try to make them straight, IMO it looks better

[Samuel]

I disagree db. I think this looks quite good. I like how theres no face adds alot of meaning. Its good. Could use some improvement, but i like it.