What do you think? It's my first abstract type picture , i don't like the text myself but it's late and i've been trying to find something that works for ages so i'll do it later:S. Marks out of ten , plus points , bad points please.

[Edit from nowadays: I made this when ifirst got photoshop, now look at my brushing in pixel art. This is thanks to Taco's great site, and all of you guys... man i've progressed alot here.]