ok well i think you overdid the effects on this one. its very well done but theres too many "speckles" on the sig. i suggest adding a gradient to make the center a better focal point because the sig seems all over the place.
also, i think you should either get rid of the text or make it less lengthy (you already said you would move it so i wont comment on that).
i think the cinematic boder is a just little too big
overall theres a a little too much of everything but great job
9/10 (v2 is better)