New Render Sig

[wfcamb]

OK.. I really am trying here.. I've been staring at this thing for a couple of hours and I don't know if it's any good.. What ya'll think? Keep in mind, I'm still in the "learning process"..

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**There's no text because I need to look up some more text tutorials.. Basically, I couldn't get the text to look right for nothing..