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3- )bad text

4- REQUEST-> w/

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6- bad

7- wierd style

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9- experiment

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v2-

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13- dont cry, Eclipse is my other name

v2.. just a swirley added

14- not good

15- REQUEST

16- REQUEST w/

17- w/

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I guess that's enough for now.. Comments and Crits welcome.