my 1st sig w/o tut

[kleenex]

well i had epic phail trying to aeon flux tutorial so i got pissed and did alot of random smudging and this my result



is it to plain ? and yes i know it would be better w/o text so any1 got suggestions for that ?

edit: added some c4ds



edit: change of text, blended a but and some grad maps



FINAL: