not bad for 3rd, could be less bright, might bring out your effects more, also the 5 focal thing is not good, 1 focal is preferred, or 2 even is fine, 3 is pushing it, 4 is fucked up, and 5... well 5 is just plain wrong. for text, try K.I.S.S. Keep It Simple Stupid I think that's what it stands for, anyways text doesn't have to be all fancy, just as long as it's appropriate font for your theme, and focal. And if it can be readable, and placed correctly. Good stuff tho, keep trying tuts.