Quote Originally Posted by Soap View Post
What you think is irrelevant. It is incorrectly done.
And telling them what needs to be corrected isn't always a lesson in learning
leaving them to figure it out for themselves can be far more instructive.

Text is misaligned and is, in places, forced just to make the shotgun shape.
In other places he's not correctly sized the type so that two small lines of text fit nicely next to one big line, what is left is a mismatch of typesize.

Not well done. needs work.

How dare you tell ANYONE what they think is irrelevant. If you have that type of attitude we don't need you on the site. EVERYONE'S opinion is relevant, whether you think it is wrong or not.