Hmm. Good work on the depth, I think you did that well. I'm not digging the text. There's too many different colors here in my opinion. I'm seeing all sorts of pinks, yellows, blues, purples, oranges, reds, browns and so on. It's just too many colors in not enough space. There's not much flow but there does seem to be some developing in his left arm and just under the text. Lighting also needs some work. Keep trying, you're getting there.