I've been told I need to work on my flow and depth, and I've also been told to add some more gradients which i also tried to achieve here.



I feel like I've done a much better job on this one then my prior two. If you're interested in seeing my improvement, they can be seen in this thread: http://www.gfxvoid.com/forums/showthread.php?t=73660

I'd love some CnC on this, and any other comments that could help me better my work. Thanks for your time.