http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/9770/powero...ydreamspeak.jpg
remindes me of that pic alot.

anyway, looks nice, but i think there should be a tad more contrast in this img, just a tad. also the eye looks a little sloppy like tacox said. the rest looks great, but a little more of a 3d effect would be very tasty. awsome job for your first.