Allrightie..

Need some advance water work, make the water flatter, as I have said to many before, mix with the settings, you can get awesome results. Is that supposed to be grass? Maybe change the color a little, do as undertone says, make it as mystic as his first render ;D Actually I agree to that the sun is a little to bright, but somehow it fits :S Maybe lower it a little to get that sunrise effect And then create a border and give it a name Good work though, keep em coming