I like it... and I'm glad it's not brown (well done, you're breaking the habit)

And I also like the contrast in the render.

The only thing I would advise, would be to try different things otherthan framing your text with those lines. They're nice, but you always do them... so try something new and gain more abilities. It gets tedious doing the same ovr and over, ne?

~ Danny (I'm not anti-line, btw ^^)