2nd go :)

[Adam]

[undertone]

the brushing, and the bg colour kill this one man, even the text is a little weak. definaly want to bring it closer together, because the cyan and the dark blue just bite at eachother like angry dogs.

[Illegalx17]

Heh, might this be inspired by twan's work? Lol, sorry man, not working. The vector buildings aren't that great, text needs help, and those colors are definetly not in harmony :P. Keep at it though.

[phoenixmaster]

Nice use of brushes, colour fits in well
But the text 'work' needs more work :P in blending in,... and the white colour blotches in the center are not vector so it conflicts with the whole theme. Hope to see a 3rd go

[ZeKayeM]

hating the stroke on the buildings and the sprakly type stuff in the background, sorry man