light explosion

[Dutch-Soldier(nl)]

hey,

I've created this for a forum
Hope you like it... C&C pleas :lol:

http://members.home.nl/wa/Photoshop/.../abstract4.jpg


Greetz

Dutch-Soldier(nl)

[*Peng*]

its ok but turn the opacicity down on the scan lines a bit theyre overpowering it

[Dick]

remove scanlines they sux on this, and imporve text, otherwise it looks good

[Hybrid]

I can't see it for some reason.

[ZtUPid0]

I'm hating the scanlines, remove them. The bg looks too crowded in my opinion, you shouldn't brush that much. Also you should change the text, it doesn't look good.
It's ok otherwise

[zade one]

i think it looks good just over brushed thats all

[Soulbound]

It burns ussssss! IT BURNSS USSSSS! Scanlines = gotta go. The opacity of the "light explosion" is a bit overbearing.

[undertone]

im going with everyone else here, the scanlines kill this one. you might try lowering the opacity, and giving it a reveal all mask, then rendering clouds or something on that. i love the colours, and the abstract brushing, good job. so what is it for?