LoL father vinayrd... anyways, its way to big, poorly blended, and for the text, well, u can start by spelling it right :P but, turn on the AA style of strong or smooth, dont leave it at none.. that gives u that pixelyness. brushing needs some depth. add a levels, and brightness/contrast layer, and just to finish my little rant, using a colorbalance as your main source of coloring is ugly