Originally posted by Vermilion+23 Hours Ago--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Vermilion &#064; 23 Hours Ago)</div>
Lose the tech brushing and i like it.
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yep ok , next time ill do thx for comment


Originally posted by rob@17 Hours Ago
nice but i agree, too much white, and lose the tech
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w000t rob commented my work yep agree with tech brushing, its just trendwhore on 3D abstracts, and it was my 1st tech brushing, thx for comment


<!--QuoteBegin-Ryzee@7 Hours Ago
I&#39;d get rid of the soughta overlayed cloud effect, you should know what i mean, its really noticable up the top & bottome left... Anyway the clouds really destroy the rushing explosion hapening in the middle... or you could keep it & run a radial blur on zoom at 100% through it twice, that&#39;ll look sweet

The text brushing I&#39;d get rid of around the the title & I&#39;d keep one of the horizontal or vertical ones & run it to the edge & that&#39;d look better than them meeting in the corner...

Good job on the render though
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i know about the clouds, ype now i can see that it looks kinda strange, but ill next time get rid of it, or use the radial blur, what i didnt in this case.... and on the tech brushing how i said it was my 1st ever, so i must get some experience with it , you know what i mean . anyway thx for comment .


and thx for comments to all of you and im glad that you like it