transfix

[Adam]

i tried again to vector im thinking of scrapping the vector though and addings something else.

[Roy]

The vector looks a little choppy, but other than that...it's not that bad. I just get more of a tech feeling from the background, which makes the vector seem like it doesn't belong. Maybe you should scrap it and try something else, maybe make a render in C4D or 3DSMax or something.

[Adam]

UPDATE

[Deadloader]

yes your vectoring is rather choppy, you do make curves and shit right? also a tip if you make an anchor point and the line isn&#39;t right, just right click on your pen tool and choose the small arrow like this "<" and you can edit the line by moving it and stuff

nice idea but on the first one the smudginess looks real bad...

[Roy]

Looks a lot better, but the lines aren&#39;t straight. If you could fix that then it would be golden.

[Adam]

Thanks for comments guys, what lines in the 2nd one hxck?