alright, the cut of the gun is good, and i see what you are going for with the focux thing. but maybe add some blue to the pic to make it a little more focused on the person. not too much, cuz then you will be distracting from the rest of the pic and it wont look good, but maybe kinda blur it more towards the gun as it goes in that direction. one more thing, maybe adjust and mess with the colors and levels to help it match the wall there a little more and the color of the other player. it looks a little odd.