The Night He Came Home

[Natashead]

[Dale]

Firstly, it needs a border. Secondly, it's lacking depth . Try some Brightness/Contrast, that should help. BUt the smokey thing, looks very good. Like i said , just lacking depth. You've brushed over the man's face quite well also. =) Not bad.

[AntidotexXx]

The smoke is good and the face is good too but i dont really see a point in the picture.. its missing some stuff like depth... meaning and a bit of color or if u went grayscale then a bit of shadows.
Good job.

[Xtremerunnerars]

I'm gunna take a stab here, but are those smudged clouds? Anyways, this scared the poop out of me before i went to bed last night, great job.

Is that the guy from the Halloween movies?

[sofa]

Sort of dull IMO.
Maybe the smoke is too plain? Add some curves to that maybe?
The big empty space in the bottom is really pointless aswell. I think you could just cut that off.
Looks plain overall, sorry.

[Natashead]

That shit was made in a 1/2 hour freaks...

[Roy]

Well if it was made that fast try telling us that, so we don't waste our time giving good C+C just to have you say something retarded.

Clouds look weak, try a curves layer.

[Ragidy_man]

if youve used louds the added a water type filter then i would lose the filter and lower the brightness but increase the vontrast to make all the blacks stadout more as well to make it sharper and not so mirky