Light Inside

[undertone]

WIP obviously, but this is basicly going to be the first actual image im going to work on since... well since i kind of stopped posting.

C&C really appreciated.

[Lokiwho]

i like it... maybe add some details to the spinal cord and maybe add a socket kind of...not just an eye ...actually you could make the eye hang down to the ground attached to a nerve or something that would be sweet but thats just me lol

[Ragidy_man]

clever idea but work on the shado a bit more and a lead which connects the lamp

[AntidotexXx]

lol good job man.. kinda reminds me of Monsters Inc.. you have inspired me to do some drawing of me own!!! arrg!!

[jerner]

nice concept. I like the idea.

The spine looks cool, and the only thing that is confusing me is the dropshadow of the lamp. Since it's lighting up the area beneith itself, there shouldn't be any shadow at all. Good job though! I would really like to see the finished one

[tabloid]

yeah i was hoping jerner would be here to drop that comment lol

it just doesnt make sense that the lamp would be casting its own shadow, other than that, clean up the lines and you're gravy baby.

[undertone]

Thanks guys, did the shadow just so i could practice going shadows to make them look kind of similar to the actual shape of the object. in the final version its going to be a full out vector, kind of mac hall styled, so all the shadow, light and lines will be gone.

thanks again.