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[jerner]

- work in progress -

comments and suggestions/critique is still welcome of course !
I would very much like to know your opinion on the whole piece !
thank you for your time !

- work in progress -

[AntidotexXx]

Sword handle looks bent upwards. Other than that nice nice man you should learn some advanced coloring and make it a render. Great job.

[Roy]

I agree with Antidote on the sword handle. Maybe tilt the head a little straighter so it doesn't touch the flames on the right side of the body. Maybe darken the pants to match the top, or were you going for like a chain-type vest or something?

Nice work overall. Great job on the shading and detail. I love your T.A., it's really good.

[jerner]

thank you very much for helping me out
I'm glad that you told me about those things - I remade them, and it do look better already. I'm currently working on redoing the head/face, since I wasn't fully happy with the look of it

I would like to color really great, but I need a better program for that. Something in the Painter 7-way I guess - would be cool to learn how to use that though

Thank you again, I will update the improvements later.

Hxck, I know that the pants doesn't "match" the top, but that is because I haven't finished the sketch :P I haven't shaded the pants or cape, and I haven't even drawn his feet yet ^^
You love my T.A. ? what's that? sorry for asking

[Roy]

TA - Traditional Art.

I had a feeling that it wasn't finished yet, but I figured I should say it anyway just in case I was wrong.

Nice work.

[Samuel]

Well, they said it all already =D

Good work. You rock at drawing wish I was that good. I can only draw chibi anime people. 0.0

Thats one god damn good looking demon =D

[jerner]

Originally posted by hxck+16 Hours Ago--><div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(hxck &#064; 16 Hours Ago)</div>

TA - Traditional Art.

I had a feeling that it wasn&#39;t finished yet, but I figured I should say it anyway just in case I was wrong.

Nice work.

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Ah, I see smart.
Hehe, yeah. Well, I&#39;ve done more to it now. The pants are as good as finished and so is the rest that I remade. The only thing remaining must be the feet. Wish me good luck ^^


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Well, they said it all already =D

Good work. You rock at drawing wish I was that good. I can only draw chibi anime people. 0.0

Thats one god damn good looking demon =D

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Thank you very much for you comment, I appreciate the compliment, and I&#39;m really glad you liked the drawing. Thanks =D

[Roy]

Good luck with the rest of it&#33;&#33;&#33;