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    [intro guitar]

    [Verse 1]

    once again i'm on my knees i'm at the mercy of you

    i'm left for dead, broken hearted, and my voice is subdued

    i can't believe you don't understand that i was the one.

    You took my heart and fucking smashed it, yeah, just for fun

    [Chorus]

    So fuck it all
    i don't need you now
    like i didn't then
    so why pretend

    and your not the person
    that i thought you were
    ego suicide
    and this shit all seems blurred

    [Verse 2]

    Late that night i called your house to see if you were home
    And your not there, i'm not suprised, i bet your fucking boned!
    Keep telling lies, straight to my face, it only makes things worse.
    "Doctor doctor, we've got no pulse", "quick go and get the nurse!"

    [Chorus]

    So fuck it all
    i don't need you now
    like i didn't then
    so why pretend

    and your not the person
    that i thought you were
    ego suicide
    and this shit all seems blurred

    [Bridge]

    So take that blade and make it count
    and spill your heart, yeah every ounce.

    [secondary vocals in background, repeat on through the last chorus]
    So take that blade and make it count
    and spill your heart, yeah every ounce.

    [Chorus]

    So fuck it all
    i don't need you now
    like i didn't then
    so why pretend

    and your not the person
    that i thought you were
    ego suicide
    and this shit all seems blurred! (scream that last blurred, let ring out)

    [outro guitar]


    Any C & C? i'm very proud of this deep and dark break up song.




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    i really really like this song. its awesome. it would be amazing to hear a band play this. be it yours or whoever. a very good, and very compelling song ( i just wanted to use that word :P )

    but i really like it, i can almost hear it in my head as i read it.

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    Thanx alot man. I'm really tryingto get a band together cuz i can sing and play guitar.



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    awesome, i hope you find some who are good to go along with you, and with lyrics like those, it would be hard to be bad. :P

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    haha its like so cheesy that its good
    it would be a fun song

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    cheesy?



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    I have 2 words for the girl that song is about ilovecoheed.
    RESTRAINING ORDER!!!

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    any song that has the word 'fuck' in the chorus is hard to take serious haha (not trying to offend you are going for a dark song)

    is this trying to be a serious song or a fun crowd pleaser?

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    just a fuck around song it's not serious. And natashead i'm a calm and levelheaded person it' not like i'd ever do anything no matter how much i hated anything, which i don't



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