Now if I may ask, why didnt you make an eye or 2 like this on your other piece? I think it would've went a bit better. It took me a little bit to find the face in your abstract piece but I guess the way it should be.

Something that might help your abstract piece a little bit would be make another eye. Since your 1 eye is rather large (comparing to the nose) and is out of prespective (the angel is ackward making it look like the eye is facing you where the nose is at an angle)