smth from me...

[J4ck_3R]

Hey! I would like to show my first big graphic. I'm still learning, so I want to know what do u think about it? Please comment

[KlngMe]

not bad for a first. I think it's overcontrasted making some of the colors look bad and some parts just dont go well together.

Keep up the good work:-)

[J4ck_3R]

Thanks, I'll work with a color...

[Dale]

Blending needs to be worked on, so do tones , and colours. But for a first it's not bad Keep at it

[Roy]

The pixel stretch and the brushing don't look too well, but the rest of it is cool. Make the top text smaller and bring it down a little, and get rid of the brushing or smudging or whatever it is. Nice try man.

[J4ck_3R]

thx for comments, I'll try correct it

[MartinBabies]

I think it looks better than most of the stuff posted in this forum. Sorry guys. Keep it up, I hope you become a skilled and experimental artist, not just some trend follower like so many here. :P
But if I have to give some critisicm, the "fire" thingy at the bottom looks kinda tutorialized. It's ok to try out tutorials to learn, but try not to use it in art. And also, I don't think you need that text. A text can ruin one's work completely!

[J4ck_3R]

thx very much unfortunately, I lost my psd file and I can't edit it :/

[Grumpylump]

Thats super-duper for a first. Theres too much noise in the middle sort of area. I love the concept and the idea is cool.