Wow. That's nice. I like it. What inspired you to write it, it's a very strong storyline =). Will there be more? .

- It's a shame this hasn't had more comments, i suppose people see the amount of text...

I hate storys this size!!! They're always uber gripping!! This was very nice, and interesting to read . I loved this. You neeeeed to write more. Or i kill you 53.4 times.

Please write more. =)