I think it needs a more visible border. Maybe a low opacity black stroke and a white stroke under it 1px greater than the black. Also, since the render isn't blended - I think the hair stands out a great deal on the background. That can be taken as good or bad, but I don't fancy it though. :unsure:
The text is quite good, however I'd nudge it to the left a little say a few pixels.

Btw - u need to be more patient man X-D People will post, it's a matter of time.