I think it looks better than most of the stuff posted in this forum. Sorry guys. Keep it up, I hope you become a skilled and experimental artist, not just some trend follower like so many here. :P
But if I have to give some critisicm, the "fire" thingy at the bottom looks kinda tutorialized. It's ok to try out tutorials to learn, but try not to use it in art. And also, I don't think you need that text. A text can ruin one's work completely!