The Last Fall

[dragoneye]

again a new piece o.O

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/29213634/
4th part of my end of the world series.
hopefully itll be 12 pieces and ill get them printed out as a calendar somehow for 2007 :P

well... any comments?

[Ben]

It took a fiar bit to load but im not moaning about that, it just gets worse :lol:

The top is 10/10 the top half of the sun is 10/0 that large black thing is too in your face, down to a 9.5/10 and then the trees just kill it, they are too bright and dont look real even though they are lol :lol:

Apart from those two things i fucking love it, awesome job ^_^

Just please fix the trees

[Dale]

Yeh i like it , too heavily colour balanced though, and the trees = bad. + there's weird lines coming off of the big ball of flames, not lines as in ------. Kinda ... some darker some brighter O.o if that makes sense which it probably doesn't...

[Groovy-Dooby-Noo-B]

I gotta agree with Ben... It's wicked sick but I think the trees are WAY too sharp or somethin... Great job though.

[Adam]

i really like the fireball but i dont really like the rest. i think the trees are way too contrasted. I think the space is lacking depth and the smoke/fogish stuff looks wierd, though i do like the streaks of smoke on the left in the upper left. But overall i think the red is just too 'red' if that makes anysense. i think the colors are just to dull.

[Dutch-Soldier(nl)]

i must agree with all the other it looks so nice!! but only the trees are killing this nice picture..and i don't like the text but overall good job!!!

[dragoneye]

http://www.deviantart.com/view/29213634/
I uploaded a new one to DA, any better? i know its kinda hard to see the difference now, but meh. i darkened the trees.

thanks for the comments.

I didnt want to draw any attention away from the fireball, so i left the space kinda simple and dullish.

[Dale]

It wasn't because they were too bright. It was because they look almost fake, the colour of them is too red imo. =)

[Ragidy_man]

i think the comet is very well done and theres nothig wrong with it just you need to deffinatley work on the trees and amybey the sky

[J4ck_3R]

I also agree with this opinions... but you made really good job with the fireball looks like it blow everything in a sec