The background ain't to bad, with maybe another lay of black brushing on overlay it could be quite nice ^_^

The text could do with smoe work though, try some tutorials on text effects, the sub text is ok but its just a bit hard to read, maybe try a less 'curvier' text.

Get rid of all the blending effects on the render and make it bigger if you can....

Ben

And Shamino, im not arguing but when Freak says its bad, he often says how to improve it etc.