Jeanette

[Shamino]

I know it lacks a lot of color, and your eye first goes to the center, then to the render. But I worked with what I was given, and it was a concept art page.

[Roy]

The big black spot in the middle kind of throws me off. And, I also think there's too much space.

Nice job as a whole though, that render is cool. Think you can get it to me sometime? IM me on AIM @ Hxck Designs.