E L E C T R I C - F U N E R A L

[jerner]

c & c are welscome, this is just an experiment i did. Tell me what you think about it!

[ZeKayeM]

nice but could look better , something off about the guy on the fence , he looks dodgy and the noise in the clouds kills me

[Tenchido]

I really like this, everything is realistic except for the guy on the fence, there is some sort of outline to the left of his body, not sure what it is but it makes it look like a cut and paste job.

[Ben]

Great idea looks good, just the lighting looks off

[ROTD]

the gate door looks like its unlocked... 0.o so whys he climbing it....

overall i like this, but its a little dark (may have been what you were going for), it kind of diminishes the details in the piece as a whole

[conspired]

As previously stated, there is an outline on the left that makes it look unnatural. However, I really shadows and highlights of the clouds, and it gives off a very foreboding mood.

[Oldeback]

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the gate door looks like its unlocked... 0.o so whys he climbing it....
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i was too busy running from the monsters chasing me, so i didn&#39;t have the time to check if it was locked or not soz m8

[hypermonkey]

meh its alright could be better

[Rai]

omg friggin awsome =3
but uhm, the left leg looks a bit odd ^^;

[Dale]

Yeah there&#39;s the fence thing as other people have said, and also the top of the clouds are blue. Kinda WTEHFOOK&#33;? when the rest of the cloud is yellow. Methinks it would look better blueish, and that should reflect on the factory floor. At the moment that&#39;s just lit up as if it was daylight 0.o . I&#39;d try neatimage for the clouds ^^ might improve it alot.

I love hte concept though, better stocks would look lush.

Err this is a photomanip.. you want me to move it to Digital Art so it gets a bit more C&C ?