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    Hi, I made this puppy in photoshop. Want your opinions on it.



    Note: The edges are very clean and such, it looks a bit scrawngy because the JPEG is 6/12 quality, I couldnt upload any bigger onto Imageshack, too big of a template.

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    Cheesy. Hate the gradient. The coloring hurts my eyes. Change the font. Put the site navigation about the games.

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    This should be on VH1's I love the 90's: Website Edition.
    Resident father figure.

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    Hmm. Thanks I guess

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    don't just say thanks, sarcastically. Keep working on it. I'll point out some of your main problems.

    Colors - They're bad. really really bad. red and blue do not mix.

    Deffinition of elements - The only thing defining your content from your navigation is a little red bar. the background colors are the same, there's nothing designating the navigation menu as such, etc.

    Effects - You used, basically, all default settings for the glows (in and out) and you kept the same hideos yellow too. don't make everything so gigantic and bubbly. clean is the key.

    Sizing - Everything is huge, make it smaller. even on a 1280x800px 15" laptop screen the text is way too big. Just like being too small, if text is too big it's unreadable.
    Resident father figure.

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    Okay, I got a plan to make it better. Give me your opinions:

    1) Lower the text size of Tycooners, too big. Move up the bar to give it more space for content.
    2) Mix up the gradients, so theres a seperate one outside where the menu & logo is, and a new one where theres the content.
    3) Change the red to a ____________________

    I dont know what to change the reds too. I do like the style though, so I don't want to change it so that it looks like cr*p

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    uuuuh......I'm really sorry but no comment, I would say start over

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    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(weasel &#064; Jun 24 2006, 06&#58;21 PM) [snapback]175642[/snapback]</div>
    Cheesy. Hate the gradient. The coloring hurts my eyes. Change the font. Put the site navigation about the games.
    [/b]
    Must agree with all this. It&#39;s not defined enough. The navigation and game selection need a new spot on the page, or a more reserved spot on the page. Text is wayy too big and cheesy...


    <div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(streetsoulja &#064; Jun 25 2006, 02&#58;44 AM) [snapback]175748[/snapback]</div>
    uuuuh......I&#39;m really sorry but no comment, I would say start over
    [/b]

    I wouldn&#39;t go that far...

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