The colors on the render don't match the theme of the sig, and the bluriness makes me feel like my vision is off. Text is pretty unreadable. And another thing - thirty effects does not make a sig 30x better. Often, less is more.

but on the positive, the tech effect is well done, and I like how the angle of the abstract brushing matches the direction Luna (?) is leaning.

So a decent job, just work on a few things.

btw, I don't play FF so if that isn't Luna then sorry.