I really lie this , the colours are awesome , and the pose is great . You have all the details done beautifully with great shading. I can't find anything wrong with the colouring or the sketch.

But the text , yeh i don't like it either. Try .... something more jagged, and brighter text . To go with his cloak a bit more.

I love the preview of the new one, can't wait to see the finished result:P

Great jhob , 9.5/10- Good luck with the text , and you'll get higher