I'd say much better xD good job. Lol, there is only one thing I think would look better though, sorry to say this, but: another render :/

I mean like a charactar-render or something would look great with that background I think, but I understand if you're not willing to ^-^. Since the bg is kinda abstract and spiky, it would look cooler with something else instead of that smooth render, but good job anyway, keep it up!