New sig-ishness

[CherryDreams]

This is a sig I made for my RO private server forms.

I don't really see much things wrong with it when at first glance after I made it. But after a while of staring, the text is a bit dark around the "And down came heaven" part.

Then the stars got in the way of the stock's luminousity blend and turned grey. Leaving a not so good looking grey spot on her.

I tried to lighten it a bit with the text but the color became a bit unbalanced for my tastes and the grey part... I'm not so sure about o.o;

Suggestions? Critiques? Comments?

[phantamines]

uum, the text is distracting here. try for something simpler. i like the stars on the side, but maybe tone them down a hair. adding color would be great too (other than the 1.5 colors you have now :P). but its solid at this moment, just not perfect, or really great.