I know the render is normally where most of the focus is but I was trying to get a equal balance between the bg and the render. I know that's not normally a good idea since it doesn't bring any focal point and make it seem like it's a big color blob with text over till you take a look at it but I wanted the bg to get attention as well.
I will try a desaturated bg though.
As for the text yeah
I'm now not so sure about that. I've done this style of text for quite some time but I still like it. Though yes if I keep it I will think more about where I place it and how it fits with it. lol your right it doesn't look like honor <_<.Right now I just slapped on this text I want something different. It's placement is actually off right now so you don't really have to critic it :P.