:P

Seen a lot better from you, I don't like how the smudging came out. And the text, your new way is better.
OMG YOUR GOING TO MAKE ME CRY lol.

The text layout that've used lately doesn't normally go with this type of render. Since it's machine armor it doesn't go that well with a classic looking font. Though I do admit I don't like this that much either that's why I am planning on a change.

When say you don't like how the smudge came out can you go deeper into that. What spacifically isn't pleasent the flow, color, where it's smudge, or whatever it is please elaborate so I can improve on this or other pojects to come.

Thank you for your feed back though JUST GIVE ME MORE!!!