My poetry...and I play electric guitar lol

[Nephilim]

Free from pain, and now with you - Nephilim
Like the early sun disappears the mist,
you disappeared my misery into bliss.
You altered my dreams….very thought of reality,
gave my dreams purpose instead of insanity.

Like the sun absorbs the early doe,
you took the heartache, the pain, the foe.
You took the big splinter out of my heart,
and replaced it with a red glowing shard.

A shard that could only represent your love,
your beauty, your trust, my faith in God.
Colored with pencil between the lines,
you filled up the spaces that I couldn’t find.

I hope that tonight I’ll lie forever in your eyes,
those eyes that could burn away all pain,
make it fade away,
make it go away….
My name was always no one…
now my name is someone!
My name is YOU!
You are love and that which is true…
%*^%%* I love you.

[Samuel]

I think some of it is a bit cheesy...=]

But still pretty good.

[Xander]

soo are you a female or are you gay?

[Samuel]

Now comeone, don't be like that. Just beacuse a guy has some feelings, dosen't make him any less manly. Don't be an emotion commie!

[Nephilim]

Arigato...actually my other poems are a bit depressing and violent...they might ban me from here, or lend me their psyciatrist...let me show you...

Morbid Angel - Nephilim
In the silence of my mind,
I feel you.
Such a pleasant surprise,
I’m dying again…
You have dug my grave,
there I will remain,
till you break down my walls,
I won’t feel again.

Silence, my mind
Madness overtaking me.
I’m dying,
dying in your memory.
Just break down my mind again.

There are walls around my heart,
I feel you.
Such sweet sorrow,
you killed me again…
You have betrayed me
therefore the promise will remain,
till you free me from sin,
I won’t feel again.

[Shadow]

That one wasn't that violent or depressing in my opinion. I like them both. You said that you play the electric guitar...do you put these to music?