hmmm, still a few things XD.

For this new one, your render looks quite a bit better brighter though it's a bit to defined compared to the bg. A simple way to get rid of that is to duplicate the render and guassian blur it, then set to overlay, screen, or lighten. Even try others to see if you like them.

The color of your text on your current is good, the only thing that needed to change was darken the "N" on "Naruto" and add a drop shadow for depth.

On the new one the right side of Naruto's face is a bit too bright. If you apply the blur that I mentioned, do this step first. Duplicate the render set it on multiply or leave as your current, then erase everything but the bright areas on his face. This will leave all the colors of the render the same as it is now but the face darker. Then lighten the opacity to probably 50%. After that try the blur if you desire.

For the "OUTSIDER" text if anything it's best IMO as your current, but to improve it change the "OUT" to white instead of black so it flows with your "Naruto" text.

Good Luck!