The third one is the best by far. The other ones are soooo common.

Specifically critiquing the 3rd layout:

Change the body font to times new roman, Georgia, etc. A serif font that is flowing. The rigidity of the sans-serif font you're using completely conflicts with the flowing script you use in the images.

The body content lacks some structure. My eyes just wander around without stopping anywhere or following any implied lines.

Well, I'm at work so that's all that I have time for right now.