Hows this one?

[FreakyLime]

I rushed this one, i don't like the font much. Anyways, tell me where to improve :P

[Wolf]

I reckon your render placement is good fix your text and bg l dont like them at all =/

[konfusion]

Improve on your text, background and blending.

-konfusion

[kemo]

i agree with wolf and konfusion work on blending and bg's other than that good work

[Graffight]

yeah i don't like this background...it's itchey(and that by no means is a technical term.) but it doesn't seem to go with the render. on the up side the colors are good.

[Freak]

The text steals the focus. The background , well, everything needs a bit of work imo.