[WIP] Pen-tooled Magnum

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I drew this for a school project 2 or 3 months ago. My teacher was like "As much as I would like to let you use this I can't because you aren't supposed to draw weapons in school."
Decided to pen tool it recently. As much as I hated the work I like the outcome. I'm going to start coloring soon, just wanted to see what you guys think and see if there was anything I should fix.


I shrank it to 50% of its original size so any mistakes will be magnified 2 times more when I'm done. Please let me know if you see anything Thanks
Oh and I drew this from Halo 2. I sat there and zoomed in on one and started drawing. Did the same for the plasma pistol but I didn't get a good sketch.
Here's the original sketch, i's messy but that's why its a sketch :