newOptimus

[RONIN]

c&c please.

[LoganGFX]

just to avoid you having to CnC your own sig again lol..
I personally think the yellow doesnt fit at all. Either white, or light blue maybe. Always use colors from your render, so it'll match up.
Also, not digging the patterns, at least on his head. Maybe erase em offa his head, and leave em in the BG. This is better than your other Optimus, just needs some tweaks.

[konfusion]

If that were yellow instead of light blue, and the font were like the one one the last sig, then 8/10. Nice job

-konfusion

[LoganGFX]

If that were yellow instead of light blue,
-konfusion

? did you mean the other way around?

[konfusion]

? did you mean the other way around?

XD - it's late (12:45), forgive me (+I was webcam-chatting with a really attractive girl I know - I was distracted...)

-konfusion

[RONIN]

thanx guys, and actually, in the original render the right side had yellow, thats why i chose yellow. maybe i just went a little overboard with the yellow.

[Papa]

XD - it's late (12:45), forgive me (+I was webcam-chatting with a really attractive girl I know - I was distracted...)

-konfusion

WHAT A PIMP.That is all.

[RONIN]

hows this one.

[LoganGFX]

better than with the yellow. The blending could use a bit of work; the left side is fine, not so much the right. Also, the text doesnt flow nearly as well, since it leans one way, and the BG leans the other. Spice it up some.

edit: took a stab at posteditting, hope you dont mind.
yours:

my take:

[RONIN]

dont mind at all. my problem is im always afraid im ruining the the stock or the look of it. but i like what you did, exept for the top right side, the bottom right look good, what did u use to do that?